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Story Plot

Mon Jun 30, 2008, 4:52 PM
Okay, what Bread Crumbs is all about...Bread Crumbs is a twisted version of Hansel and Gretel, in which the two kids get stuck in an alternate dimension rather than the woods and the evil old witch's kitchen.

Hayden and Gwen Grant, after moving into their new house, are sent by their less-than-motherly step mother (newly-made wife of their dad-Christopher Grant) to fetch some treats from the newly-opened bakery shop, called "The Gingerbread House". When they arrive there, they happen to find a special one-of-a-kind cookie that looks like a gingerbread man, only made of all sorts of sweets like gumdrops, a lollipop head, chocolate buttons, and etc. When the old woman who runs the shop, Ani Fares, tells them it's not for sale, Hayden protests and grabs it. However, Gwen, tries to wrestle it from him and they end up destroying it. When the cookie breaks, it sucks them into a different dimension! This is where our story takes place, in Marzipa, the land of sugar and sweets.

In order to return home, our hero and heroine, Hayden and Gwen, have to find the scattered pieces of the Marzipa-enchanted cookie and put them back together. To assist them, Fares gives them her special bird (slave) Kolm, her magical rolling pin Kamau, and her enchanted pastry bag Maacha. Together, they travel around Marzipa, searching for the cookie pieces.

However, they have to gather the pieces quickly, or the magic from Marzipa will seep from the rift between the dimensions and change the humans of Earth into candied creations! To make matters worse, this only effects humans, which means that humans would soon be put to the bottom of the food chain!

...So, yeah that's the main jist of it...obviously I had too much sugar, or else I wouldn't have thought of this in the last 5 minutes.

  • Mood: Pride
  • Listening to: Play My Music
  • Reading: Vietnam War book (boring)
  • Watching: Chaotic
  • Playing: Nothing
  • Eating: Nothing
  • Drinking: Diet Coke

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:iconenchanted-x:
Maybe you should write it on a sugar hype too! =] Otherwise it might not be the same because right now it sounds super fun!!

<--- Can't wait for it to come out!

=D
:iconheretic-knight085:
definitely candy obsessed

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When does one cross the fine line between desperation and insanity?
Who knows...
:iconchivalry-is-dead:
Whatever, like you have a comic that drains your imagination faster than you chugging a bottle of milk.

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It's not that I don't like chivalry...I just don't think it comes around often enough.
:iconheretic-knight085:
my imagination cannot be drained, cause it keeps on churning out new stuff, regardless of whether I want it to or not

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When does one cross the fine line between desperation and insanity?
Who knows...
:iconchivalry-is-dead:
Yippee for you, 'cause I meant that 'I' don't have an imagination that can't be drained...(sticks out tongue)

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It's not that I don't like chivalry...I just don't think it comes around often enough.
:iconheretic-knight085:
well that sucks *pokes on arm*
guess you have to be careful how you use it *laughing*

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When does one cross the fine line between desperation and insanity?
Who knows...
:icongarnet-sidus:
How have you been? Have you started "Bread Crumbs"?

I've been looking forward to seeing your work.

Things have been pretty busy here in college and I've got a ridiculous artist's block D:

Well, just checking in... b/c no one emails me anymore D:

Hope you're doing well!

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